Friday, October 2, 2009

Adding Emotion.

Adding Emotion.

1. The boy was sad when he heard that his cat died.
The lonely young child was very depressed as he was lying sleepily on his small bed, with his head stuck in his feather pillow he started weeping because of the sad news he heard about the loss of his beloved little kitten who was his real best friend. He kicked his legs against the wooden head board and screamed. He cried for another two hours until he finally fell asleep with tears still rolling down his damp round cheeks. For the next week the boy was too melancholy to do anything but watch T.V., he was even too sorrowful to play with his joyful friends. Everytime he came across a T.V. channel with a cat on it, he would stop whatever he was doing to look back at his memories with his best friend.

2. The baseball pitcher was happy when he struck out the last batter.
The lightening speed of the ball was far too much for the scronny batter on the oponing team to handle. The muscular pitcher struck him out on the last pitch and started screaming as he was full of excitement and joy. He jumped up to scream to his teamates who started galloping quickly towards him. They lifted him up carefully and threw him up five feet in the air. Everyone but the other team were chanting and screaming his name. That day was the day this pitcher would remeber forever, the day he won his trophy.

3. The old man was afraid when he heard the smoke alarm go off.
The wrinkled old man was completely terrified when he barely heard that the smoke alarm in his house went off. He stumbled slowly on his cane to the kitchen to get his wife who was baking yummy chocolate chip cookies. He told her they had to get out of their trailer now before they were burnt down with all their belongings. They started arguing like most old people and it took them about five minutes before the lady could get her husband to shut up. When he finally stopped talking she told him that it was only because the oven got too hot and that the the smoke alarm was very sensitive. So they took a rag and waved it up in the air under the smoke alarm until it stopped beaping. After that,they ate there delicious cookies and went on with their happy little lives.

4. The baby was angry when her brother took away her toy.
The newborn baby was very frustrated when her selfish older brother took away her only play toy. She screamed and wiggled as big tears ran down her plump little face. She tried crawling to catch up to him but her little baby legs wouldn't move quick enough. She weeped and weeped until her mother came to see what was wrong. She took the toy away from her son and gave the loud baby her noisy toy back. She punished the boy for being a nuscence and the baby played happily for the rest of the day until she fell asleep of tiredness.

3 comments:

  1. I liked how you, in the first one that he cried in his feather pillow!!!!!!! COOOL good job.

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  2. very dicriptive it helps paint a picture im my mind

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